Well done! I did found some sense in to it, which makes me wonder what that means about myself.

It felt very creative and have a good rhythmics. I believe it could be a great song.

WoW, this is super! Its realy deep... god i hate when I ues that word!

anyways, keep up the good work!

Love Letty

x

I hate the whole goddamned thing except for the

"East`ll be a beastAnd the west`ll beWild."

Lines. The other parts? Horrible. Horrible, terrible, wretched, garbage. Sorry, love. It doesn't really make sense.

I love the rhythm you gave it, though.

It was awsome!! I liked the feeling of depth that it gave me please post more soon!!

It makes sense to me...kinda. Well I like it either way. Good job, Sam.
C.E.