wow Alex this is another one that i feel deserves credit. mm i do wonder what inspired this peice and we will have to talk very soon, but once again the descriptions perfect, too perfect if you ask me for ecstasy!

wow, cool description here, appropriate use of swearing and nice rhyme scheme, i like the way the last line is seperate x weasel within x

this really gets the point across well, though i've never been in the situation

I love the mood and central idea of the poem. However, I do not like the inconsistent flow/rhyming patten.