waokk. Hi-lo, long time no update, glad ya did. Phillip is cool like cola! I'm really hyper, hyper hyper hyper hyper. poof, dinner time. roar. ok, great chapter, update a.s.a.p.!?! hehehe

>Tonks (@_@)

Hello! Wow, wonderful story so far. Very well written and thought out. That the someone they met on their way out, are they important? Sort of stupid of me to ask, I should just wait for the next update to find out. Anyhoo, great so far, update a.s.a.p.!

>Sleeve Purse

I really like this story so far :-) Fantasy stories rock, I'm working on one myself. I can't finish reading what you have so far tonight, but i'll be back tomorrow. I really want to see what happens next.

Great
I like this
UPDATE SOON PWEASE
PWETTY PWEASE
xoxox
ta'z luv

Nice story. Very well written. Try and update soon.

YAYAYAYAYA
YAY
I LOVE PEOPLE WHO UPDATE
NOW UpDATE AGAIN!
UPDATE.. *raises sheepie paint*
mwaha
xoxox
ta'z hun

I like it!
I LOVE IT
iT'S FABBO
UPDATE UPDATE
xoxox
ta'z hun

OH! I LIKE IT I LOVE IT!
It's a really good start!
nice description!
Just for being a good good author and *fingers crossed* in future UPDATING... i'll give yout he warning of the SHEEPIES... my moon cheese.. noo.. don't steal it...
SHEEPIES
xxoxoxx
ta'z hun

oh wow! this is a wonderful story! YOU MUST CONTINUE!

hey...u frodo lover...great story so far...can't wait...and hurry it up...i wonder who lives in that castle on the "FORBIDDEN" ground...btw sam kinda enjoys it too..but he won't admit it...:D

This is good stuff! Keep up the good work!! (Ooh... that old man gives me the creeps)

hmm... not bad i suppose... LOL jk! its awesome, your really good with description, but whers the fantasy!?! there'd better be a lot!! hehe Keep writing