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| Danielle Donselaar 2004-10-13 ch 1,  | Very good! You are going to be an amazing authour one day! Very good use of adjectives (describing words in case you didnt know) and I love the characters. Remember, you are a great friend to me and I will never stop supporting you, whichever way you choose to go :) |
| JL Hartfield 2004-08-18 ch 1,  | This is a really good story! I'm really looking forward to reading more! Keep up the good work. :) |