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Reviews For: Even the Ocean
Jo The Pirate 2004-09-20 . chapter 1
Your words are gorgeous. I especially loved these two lines:
Where the fireflies provide the only light / and the butterflies provide the only wind
Lovely. Keep writing! ‡
A.D Williams 2004-08-31 . chapter 1
Wonderful Writing here! I love it ^^ the pure description is BEAUTIFUL!
-Amber
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