Great story, keep it up.

Ooh. :D I had wondered what the necklace thing was about, and now we seem to be coming to a kind of climax. Can the curse be broken? Does it matter? I'm intrigued.

:D CD

This story is so wonderful. I'm in love with it and your style *_* the characters are just lovely!

Ooeh. I really like the alchemist - he's great fun. :D

Right. Now I've gotten to the temporary end, I'm sticking you on alert, you wonderful wonderful writer! This is just so excellent. I don't care how long it takes for you to update, but when you do I'll probably squeal with excitement. :-D Oh I love it way too much!

Oh my god! Gareth no!

Oh I love this chapter! And I love Card! Love him!

I loved Card refusing to turn around and walking backwards. Ha ha. That made me laugh. And is Card showing some sort of fatherly instinct here? Hmm.

"But both the Halfling and the Human fell into step behind Card, and he nearly turned around to yell at them for being so stupid."

Aaw! He cares! He cares!

Aaw. Poor Card.

"I need you to--"

"Wake up!"

Oh, that was cruel! I wanna know now, but I love the suspense of it all.

Sorry, I tend not to review much, and only do when I feel like commenting, but just assume I am reading, and enjoying immensely.

I really enjoy this story, keep it up :D

Wow did I need this. First Gareth being frikkin adorable with Iogoem, then the awesomeness with Card, and the swee~eet...! Oh this was lovely, and as usual the descriptions made me grin at the screen like an idiot. There were some typos, I noticed, but nothing that I felt I could take the time to record instead of reading on. Except one: "Card shot up out of his crotch and grabbed Gareth by the collar," I thought you'd enjoy that too. :D This was so lovely...!

please update soon love your story. just got done reading all of it. it was great.

I have read, so I shall review. I like the story... evil fairies are always more interesting then the giggly ones you tend to hear about now. And I find there's something endlessly amusing about Card.. I'm not sure what it is though. I've always liked the name Gareth (again no clue why) so he was a hit from the start and his brand of stupidity is somehow endearing. Iogoen is interesting too, but I have trouble picturing what she looks like.

Well that's enough babbling. Hopefully you find time and inspriation for anouther chapter soon.

This story took a turn for the best that I had NEVER expected. It's nearly 2AM and I have to be up in about four and half hours, yet I couldn't stop myself from reading. I absolutely had to know what was going to happen...And I still need to know.

I'm ecstatic. I love it...it's better than I'd first imagined :D