MORE! MORE! MORE!

:D Really awesome start! I love those typical love triangles.

Ah... mistakes...?

Oh, um, in the prologue, when you said "cookers", it's actually suppose to be "cook"... -o-; I think that's about it, lol.

Oh! When you upload it, it comes out as normal kind of font, ne? Well, all you need to do is save it as an HTML file. ie. Save as... and choose the type as .htm or .html and save it as that. Then a box will popup asking you if you're sure you want to save it this way cause it won't keep it's original format. Click yes, okie? It only says that because it won't be original to you on your computer as a file, but when you upload it online, it'll be exactly the way you typed it with all the bolds, italics, etc. okie? :D Hope I helped! And also, XD; thanks for your review on my story Food of Love!

This is such a cute story, will you be updating it?

WE! you're story is so cute! What will happen next! I want to know soon! - and by the way thanks for review my fic! - I'm very grateful -

ANOTHER PERFECT CHAPTER!
Okay, I'll make you a deal. You carry on writing this fic real soon, and I'll help you with wordpad. Got it? ;)
Ha ha I'll send you the email, but you gotta write more of this fic when you read it n_n

well... as for mistakes... I FOUND NONE! PERFECT!
I LOVE this fic! Prince Hanon sounds SO cool and Cythie sounds quite sweet n_n I'm gonna move onto the second chapter RIGHT AWAY and I am SO putting you on author alert, update soon, okay? This is just the kind of fic I like, it has everything! I love romance manga - especially comedy romance! And this is a comedy romance with an extremely likeable main character, perfect! *moves onto 2nd chapter immediately*

I haven't a clue what the summary is.

Hey, I like the beginning! I look forward to the next chapter. _