Powerful, emotional . . . and kinda dark . . . you do a great job of expressing emotions. Keep it up

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I know this feeling... and you've expressed it very well. :)
Keep writing

*sniff* Very good but sad. The emotion was so great in this, and real. :-( Fantastic job.

Very powerful and passionate, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.

whats ging on with you two? im so lost sometimes. ah well. nice poem mind you. very sad and hurtful though. but good.