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Nice imagery, I liked the way you showed time as sort of an endless flow, ticking on no matter what we think or do.

Amazing descriptioun! "lustrous moon" "abyss of night" "clouds of my dreams"... that was great imagery, so pretty! . Overall, awesome poem, I really liked reading it.
Write on!

Very good. Quite deep but ending on a happy note. I like it.
Thank you so much for reviewing my poems. It is much appreciated.
Sugar

A very nice poem! It has that endless circle effect that I like to read. It's also got rain, which I've always enjoyed reading about. To me it symbolized cleansing of the soul. All in all it was a very well written poem! good job!
-Mr McPierce