|Reviews for Time Ticks Away|
| deathfairy20 11/24/04 . chapter 1
| Quid 8/22/04 . chapter 1
Nice imagery, I liked the way you showed time as sort of an endless flow, ticking on no matter what we think or do.
| Sang Yu Nung 8/20/04 . chapter 1
Amazing descriptioun! "lustrous moon" "abyss of night" "clouds of my dreams"... that was great imagery, so pretty! . Overall, awesome poem, I really liked reading it.
| SugarLuva 8/20/04 . chapter 1
Very good. Quite deep but ending on a happy note. I like it.
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| Mr. McPierce 8/20/04 . chapter 1
A very nice poem! It has that endless circle effect that I like to read. It's also got rain, which I've always enjoyed reading about. To me it symbolized cleansing of the soul. All in all it was a very well written poem! good job!