Cool story, I like it lots. (Roun's funny) I also like how the twin's are sort of opposites in personality. good work, keep going.

Wow! This is so good! I really like how you've made it seem so realistic. The twins are great; it would be so neat to be able to communicate with someone in your head! Great writting and please update soon!

I love this story, It's right up there with my story (P&T).

Wow this is really good! Very well written, intersting, and just fun to read. I really like it. Please update soon so that I don't have to go insane wondering what will happen!