|Reviews for Angelic Glances|
| BlackLilyArcher 9/11/04 . chapter 1
| Abigaila Long 8/24/04 . chapter 1
Very good I think my favorite line was "a harmony so blue" I don't know why I'm weird. I don't know why but the lines "And I smile at you...and you smile at me..." they seem to really stick out. Was that what you intended? Maybe you could make a better transition between them. I don't know, maybe it was just me. But everything else very good!