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| KaiKaiCutie 2005-06-28 ch 2,  | Great Story please hurry up and update soon. |
| mandy 2004-12-27 ch 1, | why havnt you updated in such a long time? its a good story update!! |
| Mandy 2004-11-27 ch 1, | Really good!! Update soon. Whoot Whoot;) |
| Kezza 2004-08-26 ch 2, | Good Chapter! Update SOON! |
| Insane King 2004-08-25 ch 2,  | Interesting. I like the plot line of this so far. You might want to check up on your gramtical stuff, but we all make stupid mistakes like that, don't we? I'll keep reading, you've gto me drawn in. Check on my two stories, perhaps? ~King |
| Infinite Abyss 2004-08-25 ch 2, | This is really good. Add the next chapter soon. |
| Rose Richonne 2004-08-24 ch 2, | Very Very Good!! Yay :) Perfectly done, can't wait for the next chapter! I love where this is going **hums happily** |
| Rose Richonne 2004-08-22 ch 1, | This was really good, and amusing. I really like where the plot is going. Can't wait to keep reading ~ Please update the next chapter soon! :) |
| Flender Bender 2004-08-20 ch 1, | This looks good so far... I wonder why you didn't get reviews last time? ~Flenda |
| xTamx 2004-08-20 ch 1, | ah this is cool! I dont see why you didnt get response for it before. hehe is he gonna put one of those thingies around her neck?? lol! I cant wait till you update next! Good job! |
| Kezza 2004-08-20 ch 1, | Good Start! Please Continue! Update SOON!! |
| Emily 2004-08-19 ch 1, | Nice job :) I like it so far. The only thing is that I have no idea what anyone looks like other than a six pack on Jonathan. It needs description, try that. I do want to find out what happens in the next chapter though! Please update soon ~ Emily |
| reasonswhy77 2004-08-19 ch 1, | Hey this is pretty good! I'm curious to see what happens when she gets to Hawaii. |