|Reviews for The People I See|
| Captain Swoots 1/25/05 . chapter 3
| Tabi Berkey 1/4/05 . chapter 3
Interesting-like the detail-maybe try to guess as to what their life is too? Just a thought.
| Tabi Berkey 1/4/05 . chapter 2
I like how you put "for only one person/can control your life/and that person is/you." I think more detail would make it more interesting, though...
| Tabi Berkey 1/4/05 . chapter 1
Don't you just love to people watch? It's so much fun.
| Strikeout 12/30/04 . chapter 1
What an interesting, original idea! I really liked this. I see people at my university that make me stop and think like that. I really liked this
| Helgmelia 8/20/04 . chapter 1
Very nice description. I liked the "flimsy $100 dress" line - good and sardonic.