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| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-09-06 ch 1, | ah wow, thats was so good! what a wonderful poem here! |
| Catseye*Rose 2004-08-23 ch 1, | Very interesting. I like it. I hate being in one of those situations :S. |
| Tom Madden 2004-08-21 ch 1, | this one was cool. i liked the 'beloved' stanza best. real nice work. only thing i found off was that 'a pray' should be 'a prayer' or 'you're praying'. great job! |