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| Daisy Silk 2006-07-25 ch 7,  | abusean interesting story:i really enjoy it! |
| sarita 2006-06-02 ch 7, anon. | abuseomg I love this story! Its really good...I love the setting and the characters are very believable...update really soon cause I can't wait to read more! |
| Gabby 2005-12-22 ch 7, anon. | abuseomg! that is such a great story! i luv it! |
| cinnamon-24 2005-12-16 ch 7, | abuseIT's great! Update! |
| cinnamon-24 2005-12-16 ch 6, | abuseWhat can I say? It's good! |
| cinnamon-24 2005-12-16 ch 5, | abuseGavin cracks me up! |
| cinnamon-24 2005-12-16 ch 4, | abusewa haa how! That was a rollercoaster ride! Good job! |
| cinnamon-24 2005-12-16 ch 3, | abuseGasp! |
| cinnamon-24 2005-12-16 ch 2, | abuseGreat buildup! Can you check out my stories. They are called Leyene with the green eyes (under historical) and Percrastination (under Fantasy. You are doing a great job! |
| Saber of shadow 2005-10-17 ch 4, | abusenot bad,just a bit long winded |
| R.M.Whitaker 2005-09-16 ch 6, | abuseWell, well, well! Surprise, surprise! I really wasn't expecting this! I must say, I like Sadie. I like how she's so lady-like. In most stories on Fictionpress the girls are all tom-boyish and eat nails for breakfast. Sadie seems so much more realistic and likeable to me! As for Gavin, well, I don't think my heart will ever be truly mine again! lol Update again asap! |
| R.M.Whitaker 2005-09-01 ch 5, | abuse*clapping hands* oh, I love it! Gavin is adorable! I'm simply in love with him! I have a feeling Sadie will meet up with her father again soon... I know how hard it is too keep up a story when you're trying to settle down in a new dorm at college. I'm planning on going to BYU when I finish beauty school. But I'll try my hardest to be patient while I wait for the next chapter! |
| R.M.Whitaker 2005-09-01 ch 4, | abuseHe he, Gavin sounds like a cutie! I like him! Even though he's hardly said a word, I like him. |
| R.M.Whitaker 2005-09-01 ch 3, | abuseGah! I knew it! I knew it would be something like that! To tell the truth, I actually thought that Sadie would fall in love with this Laroy dude and he'd turn out to be the son of her father's partner or something like that. Very good plot! |
| R.M.Whitaker 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseWho is she?! Wgo's her father! Gah! I simply MUST know! |