I love how you frantic you got it to sound with the formatting and repitition.

Fan-** tastic!

LOVED the title, keep em coming!

beautiful and entirely passionate. i am left speechless and rivited. excellent!
~ katy x0x0x

O_O Cass...uh...is everything ok?
The poem is good...but the subject of it...um...
Just...O__O
~Pandista

I relaly love the format... and I can relate to this poem too! I MISSED YOU! lol... welcome back

Yeah your back :) and i love your style. it's interesting to see how you emphasis the words all differenlty! it's cool and very unique! Good poem!

Greatly creative. I like how you put together words without spaces at some points, and separated them with dashes at others. Good.
~Writer of Darkness~