 Pandaemonic Paradigm 2006-08-06 . chapter 1Very pretty and sweet. |
 UnfortunatelyFortunate 2005-04-14 . chapter 1ah the teenage angst poem of "Im sorry". Good job though. I love how short and to the point your poems are! I always have to like go on and on trying to get the point across. *thumbs up* |
 Cthulhu 2004-12-06 . chapter 1"BUT I STILL CAN'T LEGALLY DRINK! ...I HATE MY LIFE!"
Lol, well said my feline friend, also, this poem was uberly good. I loved almost conversational tone it carries, GREAT JOB! |
 MT 2004-09-14 . chapter 1 Angst, huh? I really don't like angst... Oh well, 'tis a nice poem. Things people go through in love... BUA! My "all romance" view in love is being brought down by poems of this sort... *whimpers away* |
 KatyGirl1219 2004-09-10 . chapter 1by the goddess, woman, you've captured everything i've been feeling as of late into 14 lines. if that's not talent, i don't know what is! keep it up, (as if you'd ever stop)!
~ katy x0x0x |
 simpleplan13 2004-08-20 . chapter 1aw sadness... without the title I jsut thought it was just being scared or something, but the title changes the meaning... ive been in that situation.. I relaly like the end |
 lilyqueen777 2004-08-20 . chapter 1 Wow! I love this poem! hmm...i felt like this one time, being so helpless and all, yet i knew i wanted to say "i love you." yet that never happened... |