aw again, Devon really is amazing :)

aw I luv Devon, Neely is so dumb, lol

I'm likein this so far :)

So I get this story off of a community thinking it's completed, loving this story and reading all of it. It took me a few days because this week has been busy and I finally get to this chapter thinking it's the last one only to see that it is not finnished and has not been updated for the last two years. I just about cried right there and then. PLEASE UPDATE! SON!!
-thanks,
Emmalie-Jane

oh my gawd! i so hooked on this story!! i hope u update soon!
The chapters are so long!! dang girl! but love love it anyways! i've always had a problem with authors who wrote realy short chapters but that's not the case here!!
The characters in the story are awesome! Im really loving Gabrielle! she knows how to keep a guy's ego in check and smash it! (reminds me of me XD) wht is it with guys and giantic egos??
Devon is such a sweety, so is Steven! totally heart him! i think it's amazing that he would think about other ppl (how he stopped playing soccer so ppl who actually wanted the scholarships had a chance @ them)that's so nice!!
the situation Devon and Neely got them selves into is crazy! i can't imagine how she's keeping this from her twin!
i can't wait till u finish the story! There's so much to look forward to!! You should do a spin-off for Steven and Shauna. hopefully they both can find their perfect match. maybe Steven and Shauna could be a couple!

I love this story very much. :D

hey can u write d next chapter plzz if ur not 2 busy

Gah, I love this story so much!!

It is cliche but you have put your own spin on it. There is other stuff going on outside of Devon and Neely, which is great. It looks like you started this when you were quite young so there are quite few grammar errors. However, the story is so good that it is easy to overlook it!

I hope you get back to finishing this, along with starting your other projects. All the best!

Katie

hey this is a nice one
hope you update soon

Super awesome story, I LOVE IT! Update real soon, please?

Nichloe

I really really love this story... so please more Neely & Devon and less Chris & Gabrielle... I like them but I love Neely and Devon... :D

Ok so I definitely came across this story this morning and read the whole thing in one sitting. I love it I know it has been a while since your last update. But you are very talented and I wish you would continue writing. Please update ASAP!!

Alright.
Do you know I'm considering making you PUBLISH this?!
I'm serious, I'm totally thinking of these characters every day now. Soemthing'll happen, like:
Random Person: Oh my gosh, he's such a pig!
Me: NO HE'S A UNICORN!
Random Person: um... what?
Me: Fine. He's a man on a pogo stick.
This story has affected me in strange but beautiful ways!
And I realized it hasn't been updated in two (almost three) years. Imma kill you mahself if you don't update. And I may just be more violent then Chris, Devon, Jason, Aiden, and-- my personal favorite-- SHANE all together!
No seriously, Shane is my favorite. I love that dude. Nice to know I'm not the only one who can drive just a little too early for their age... heh heh

UPDATE! Cool story.
Love Gabby/Chris!

I like toally love this story..this is way too good. Superb :D