I can so imagine hearing this on the radio. I really liked it. IT's flowilicious. Keep it up

I really liked the bridge of this song. It makes a lot of sense to me now...but personally, I wish I didn't. Hey, it's all experience in the end.
Yoku dekimashita

This song was great. You should really create some music to go with this, if you don't already have one.

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hey alison! well like all of your other poems/songs/stories/ect. i liked it very much:)keep writing!! luv, meg

I like it a lot.. especially the stanza about the play and how youshow holding out words.. nice song!