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| someone.anyone 2004-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting concept. i really REALLY enjoy the idea of "love being the deadliest sin"... and i also love the angsty ending. *dreamy eyes* but then i love angst in general. |
| Rinfirithiel 2004-08-28 ch 1, | abusethat was so great! i'm glad that it didn't have a happy ending...sometimes those get annoying because they're not realistic. this story was definitely realistic and very relatable. i enjoyed it a lot! Rinfirithiel |
| Infinite Abyss 2004-08-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! Keep up the good work! |
| Caladai 2004-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was so great. Very nice job. Keep writing - you're very good. ~Cal |
| Talyn Gray 2004-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI don't know the seven deadly sins... ;_; Anyway, wow! it's so cool. ^_^ My eyes just kind of glided over the words, it was really easy to read and I felt myself being pulled into it even more and more. |
| s.y.l.l. 2004-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was nothing like i ever read before. It reminded me of urban legends, but it didn't have the trademark twist. However it seems like your male character is a text book jerk, maybe you could add on to his character? Keep up the good work. |
| gollygoshkers 2004-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great story. Girls always want the bad boys. You portrayed that well even though he wasn't necessarily a bad boy. Just different. Intriguing. Good job. Great story. Keep writing. |
| Sang Yu Nung 2004-08-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was amazing. You have an awesome writing style full of description, but not to the point where it gets boring. Even your summary made me want to read it! ^.^ The guy was so intriguing, and everything seemed so perfect... *sigh*- even though we knew it had to turn out differently in the end. I like the little part in "present time" about wishing to go back... It was a great short story- *write on*! |