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| flying blind 2004-08-28 ch 1,  | abusethis is really well writen, i really enjoyed reading it. thanks for your review, and your tip, i completely missed it myself. but ive made the change, so thanks again. keep writing! =) |
| LividGrowth 2004-08-27 ch 1, | abuseOH! i love this story, i remember reading it before, it is so cool, you have such awsome ideas and your writing is incredible... keep writing for me! |
| The Mock Turtle 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abuseWow! Much better than anything else I've read...I was hoping I would run into a well-written story while I was here. I am just surprised it took me so long! It might help if you had something creative to your writing, like metaphors, or symbolism. The sentence structures are fabulous, the initial action is intriguing...all you truely need is to play with the words a bit... |