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| The Grim faced cookie demon 2004-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww. I'm so sorry. I'm glad you've found a way to make it easier on yourself. I think I'd go to pieces if Ethel died. gr. I need to shut up about Ethel. AND I NEED TO STOP CALLING HIM ETHEL. PLEASE HIT ME ON MONDAY. anyways, that was really good. I bet you got a really good grade on that. keep up that good, good work, homefries. |
| :) 2004-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseA day like today is hard to deal with, But with everything perfect it makes losing a loved one, A little bit easier. This was my favorite part. The poem is bittersweet. This is definitely how a person feels when they lose someone. |
| Matt91 2004-09-10 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! I loved this poem! I can totally elate to this poem! I have lost 2 loved ones, my grandmother and my grandfather! It was such a sad time! Funerals are so sad! |
| lostnfound007 2004-09-10 ch 1, | abusethis is cool. its deep. lol, but seriously, its good. i like it... please review my poem, im not sure if its that great, tho... |
| jasmine (jaslovessean( 2004-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, its so sad! I like it! |
| bklyangel 2004-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseBut with everything perfect it makes losing a loved one, A little bit easier. that was my fav. part it was wonderful. i loved it. |
| TiGeR-BaBe1989 2004-08-20 ch 1, | abuseaw that was kinda sad, but very good! |
| Songs of sorrow 2004-08-20 ch 1, | abuseAhh, sad but kinda sweet at the same time. very descriptive which is always a good thing. Great job, did you get a good grade? S.O.S x |