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The Grim faced cookie demon
2004-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww. I'm so sorry. I'm glad you've found a way to make it easier on yourself. I think I'd go to pieces if Ethel died. gr. I need to shut up about Ethel. AND I NEED TO STOP CALLING HIM ETHEL. PLEASE HIT ME ON MONDAY. anyways, that was really good. I bet you got a really good grade on that. keep up that good, good work, homefries.
:)
2004-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseA day like today is hard to deal with,
But with everything perfect it makes losing a loved one,
A little bit easier.
This was my favorite part.
The poem is bittersweet. This is definitely how a person feels when they lose someone.
Matt91
2004-09-10
ch 1,
abuseOMG!! I loved this poem! I can totally elate to this poem! I have lost 2 loved ones, my grandmother and my grandfather! It was such a sad time! Funerals are so sad!
lostnfound007
2004-09-10
ch 1,
abusethis is cool. its deep. lol, but seriously, its good. i like it... please review my poem, im not sure if its that great, tho...
jasmine (jaslovessean(
2004-08-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw, its so sad! I like it!
bklyangel
2004-08-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseBut with everything perfect it makes losing a loved one,
A little bit easier.
that was my fav. part it was wonderful. i loved it.
TiGeR-BaBe1989
2004-08-20
ch 1,
abuseaw that was kinda sad, but very good!
Songs of sorrow
2004-08-20
ch 1,
abuseAhh, sad but kinda sweet at the same time. very descriptive which is always a good thing.
Great job, did you get a good grade?
S.O.S x
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