wow! That has to be one of the best songs i've ever read!

a beautiful, eerie song
that really gets to you.
it flows well, too.

great job once again great word choices great chorus n full of emotion keep up the good work

This was wonderful. YOu can feel the pain and aanger behind it. Sry for taking so long to read. Been busy waiting for school to start. It was nice having something to read before going today. Awesome work

This is pretty good I enjoy the chorus alot i like the rhythym there is nothing you can't do you are the best #1 :0)

And the crowd goes wild. (or at least starts Typing madly)
Very good. You should try and put it to music. And send it to me because I realised I can't sing while I was disgracing what you wrote(;

this song flowed very well, i could almost hear it in my head. nicely done.

One of the best songs I've ever seen written up here. Keep it up!