Great poem. A lot of emotions. Keep writing!

I think this is a great poem! had to put on my fav. list! )

I love how you portray the emotions! I could so relate to this! Good Job _ keep on writing!

I love how you portray the emotions! I could so relate to this! Good Job _ keep on writing!

I love how you portray the emotions! I could so relate to this! Good Job _ keep on writing!

Amazing work, dear! _

This is really good. I especially like the way it starts out with short lines, and fans out to longer ones at the end. And I like your pen name too, it's unusual )

Lots of emotion was put into this. Great job, I liked it.