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worried
2005-06-06
ch 1,
This is a bit disturbing...in my lil ole town in texas, three people have commited suicide in the past year and a half. One was a twelve-year-old boy, one was a fifteen-year-old girl, and one was a eighteen-year-old guy fresh out of high school. That isn't the path to go down even if you feel that you're alone. All three deaths impacted the whole town greatly and that is not something that anyone's family should have to go through. If these are your real thoughts, you should really get some help.
Aryanda
2005-02-03
ch 1,
Freaky, yet, well written. i can connect.
dreamerdoll
2004-08-22
ch 1,
so sad...but very good...would add more, but im tired.
Zems
2004-08-21
ch 1,
dude...this is some sad ** u got! yeah nolee! i love you(pletonicly)! lol.
Faceless Shaddow
2004-08-21
ch 1,
This isn't how you're really feeling, is it? Why aren't you replying to any of my e-mails? Sorry, I'm just kinda worried about you.
SILVA-eR
2004-08-20
ch 1,
AH NO DONT DIE !
interesting poem u've got here... vry descriptive... GOOD RHYMING! AND KEEP WRITING!
!!WRITE TO LIVE! !!LIVE TO WRITE!!
SAY CHESe
-Silver
P.s. Hope you feel better... if u realli wantts to die.. uhm.. think positive? iono.. okay.. im gone
scribophile
2004-08-20
ch 1,
This was a bit... morbid... even for you, Nolee. It's just horrible that teenagers are pressured so much that it evolves into this... one of my close friends nearly did it, and it scared us so much. Anyways, update your other stories and stuff soon.
-Kaz-
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