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| simpleplan13 2004-08-21 ch 1,   | I like that last metaphor... nice poem.. def. confused lol |
| laerai 2004-08-20 ch 1, | I really liked the way you put this. The feel of the poem seems to change at the end. The very end, the language gets more flowery, and it seems to differ from the more simple, but effective words you were using before. I can personally relate to this situation. |