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Reviews For: Lost Hope

L'Amante di Raso
2005-03-28
ch 1,
this is my all time fav. of yours. it is everything you stand for and i think it was beautifully expressed
Mistress K. Darq-Chylde
2005-03-07
ch 1,
The people who treat others as property and more baser than themselves are to blame, Mikey. There's too many people in this world who could give a ** less about the human beings around and near to them.

Now, about the poem... Your vocab used is very appropriate, what with your soul being all ancient and old-fashioned. Personally, I think this is one of your best.

You need the same shirt I want. It says "Losing faith in humanity, one person at a time."
Bragi
2004-08-21
ch 1,
Amen to that. Great flow, great verbage, great rhyming. Awesome job in general.
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