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hakubaikou 8/21/04 . chapter 1Your poem is great... as it always is. So here... yet again...is my reply. "Goodbye I know that you can't stay forever It would be wonderful if you could But even though you won't leave now Someday, I know you would The world is just a cruel place When we'll all just disappear And when the ones we care for die It seems pointless to stay here It hurts that you have to leave But I know that you can't stay Goodbye for now, my dear friend We'll meet again someday Though when the time comes that we do We would have forgotten everything But I'll still look for you on the other side Though I'm not sure about such a thing You should know that I would follow soon Because time will pass by fast But for now, I'll hold on, though it's hard And one day, I'll breathe my last The time has come, you'll say farewell Goodbye, my darling friend I know I'll dream of you tonight And I'll think of you 'til my end" It rhymes... but It's still serious. |