|Reviews for The Thirteenth|
| Guest 5/21/13 . chapter 1
| Cool 2/20/13 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved this! Very well written! :D
| Tina3 12/23/12 . chapter 1
I think that this one shot is well written and very detailed with the actions the charaters take. I think you should just put more detail of what the people are wearing and their eye colour etc as its a bit vague however well written and make more one shots! I enjoyed it ;) hope this gives you the help you were looking for. If not I'm sorry ahahaha xD xxx
| glowphone 6/25/12 . chapter 1
Barry Hall Kravatz like if you switch the b and the h it's Harry (Hairy) Ball Kravataz (Crevasse, a.k.a. a crack)! That must be intentional! Am I the only one who got that?
What an awesome story too! Love it!
| An 4/8/12 . chapter 1
Haha aw so cute and perfect :) Loved it!
| ffh 11/17/11 . chapter 1
really cute story !
| Rosedreamer101 11/4/11 . chapter 1
LOL - olalala ;)
| DofD 10/25/11 . chapter 1
| its-like-i-sed 9/28/11 . chapter 1
.AWESOME! D xx
| Call Me Irresponsible 2/23/11 . chapter 1
This story was cute. Reading it was relaxing. So thank you.
I know that was probably a short review, but it was a short story, so...
| Brolinshipper 11/6/10 . chapter 1
Amazing, i loved it:)
| Warrior-Princess06 11/3/10 . chapter 1
'haha..nice..love it.! :))
| christinaxxyo 4/4/10 . chapter 1
This was really cute :)
| DA-chen1 3/22/10 . chapter 1
Yeah, very sexy and surprising.. that he cared so much!
Sweet in the end!
| renegade01 2/21/10 . chapter 1
rest assured, you can definately write one-shots. ;)
loved daniel in this. she should have got some payback on barry. ah well.