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| Reviews for The Thirteenth |
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  Guest 5/21/13 . chapter 1 Great |
| Cool 2/20/13 . chapter 1 Wow, I loved this! Very well written! :D |
| Tina3 12/23/12 . chapter 1 I think that this one shot is well written and very detailed with the actions the charaters take. I think you should just put more detail of what the people are wearing and their eye colour etc as its a bit vague however well written and make more one shots! I enjoyed it ;) hope this gives you the help you were looking for. If not I'm sorry ahahaha xD xxx |
 glowphone 6/25/12 . chapter 1Barry Hall Kravatz like if you switch the b and the h it's Harry (Hairy) Ball Kravataz (Crevasse, a.k.a. a crack)! That must be intentional! Am I the only one who got that? What an awesome story too! Love it! |
| An 4/8/12 . chapter 1 Haha aw so cute and perfect :) Loved it! |
| ffh 11/17/11 . chapter 1 really cute story ! |
| Rosedreamer101 11/4/11 . chapter 1 LOL - olalala ;) |
| DofD 10/25/11 . chapter 1 Amazing. |
| its-like-i-sed 9/28/11 . chapter 1 .AWESOME! D xx |
| Call Me Irresponsible 2/23/11 . chapter 1 This story was cute. Reading it was relaxing. So thank you. I know that was probably a short review, but it was a short story, so... |
| Brolinshipper 11/6/10 . chapter 1 Amazing, i loved it:) |
| Warrior-Princess06 11/3/10 . chapter 1 'haha..nice..love it.! :)) |
| christinaxxyo 4/4/10 . chapter 1 This was really cute :) |
| DA-chen1 3/22/10 . chapter 1 Yeah, very sexy and surprising.. that he cared so much! Sweet in the end! DA-chen |
| renegade01 2/21/10 . chapter 1 rest assured, you can definately write one-shots. ;) loved daniel in this. she should have got some payback on barry. ah well. |
