Nice! that was really good1:)

I loved it! Daniel...wow, he's awesome!

Very fun to read. And I think that you are just fine writing short stories. It was a good length and ended well.

sickas story

This was really really good! I enjoyed reading it:) I'm looking forward to reading more of what you have written!

So So So Cute!

Haha, This is so adorable!

It turned out awesome. I loved it.

I don't know about this. I really liked reading this story, but when I got to the end it still seemed kind of unfinished for some reason, though I'm not too sure that the story really could continue much after where you have stopped it.

Anyway, don't get me wrong, I still like this story. Nice work, especially since it's only your second short story =)

Nice! I really enjoyed it.

Annie

That was really good! It was excellently well written, and I LOVE Daniel. Can I kick Barry or something? And what's with that leggy brunette? She shows up in almost ALL of the stories I read...:) ha ha. Anyway, great job!

LMAO! I loved it! Very cute - one of the best short stories I have ever read! Thank you for writing!

I really do hope that he's not just a rebound... :)

So I'm 4 years late! I loved this. I'm sucha sap. Very good story. Excellent writing.

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