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Reviews For: The Thirteenth - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

xSilentTearsx
2008-08-19
ch 1,
abuseLMAO! I loved it! Very cute - one of the best short stories I have ever read! Thank you for writing!
EnChAnTeD-KoReAn
2008-06-19
ch 1,
abuseI really do hope that he's not just a rebound... :)
StoryPictures
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseSo I'm 4 years late! I loved this. I'm sucha sap. Very good story. Excellent writing.
Songs of an Angel
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseI
dOrKy-GuRl03
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseaw glad that her day turns out great..i like it..that is very good one shot...looking forward your stories if you want more...bye..bye..
RoseLife
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseNAW
so very adorable
good job, i thought it was a fab one shot
xD
maybe a suggestion for the title, could be 'bad luck" or 'my lucky charm'
haha they sound stupid :P
anways well done!
xLittleBlackConverse.
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseaww!! i LOVED this one-shot so much!!
and god, i so wish Daniel was a real guy...yum :) lol
notreal17
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abusei thought that was soo good!
Sydney
2008-01-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseit was great
real good
emerald
2007-12-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice, that was fun to read and Daniel is a cutie.
IOU
2007-12-08
ch 1, anon.
abusefantastic!! loved it great one-shot!
d666lisa
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseBRILLIANT STORY. LIKEABLE CHARACTORS AND REALLY WELL WRITTEN :-D
starlit x sky
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abuseAww that was brilliant!
Good job
HaPpYGuRl
2007-10-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseAAw...ThT WaS cUte!
LuVd iT!!
Yas 'Yz' Shah
2007-09-21
ch 1,
abusecute...I LOVE IT... but (eye twitches) too... (face twitches) much... (body twitches) LOVEY - DOVEY!!

(Goes crazy) OVERLOAD! OVERLOAD!! (Loafing around...)QUACK! QUACK! QUACK! LOVEY THE CHAPPY...

(Stop dead and dies)

-Yours truly-

Ayamin

PS: I LOVE IT!
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