I love it! Good job!

And don't forget to update your story on fanfiction!

-Betsy

update update update update...sorri not this poem lol, i mean all ur other stories XD

WOAH... talk about deep and meaningful! jesus girl ur an amazing poet.ur words are so intricatly used and even though the poem is sad... i love it!!i like tha ways u repeat 'Silence as i wipe away my tears...'it really just adds the meaning the reader has to figure out at the end.anyways well done!!ur amazing!o and please r and r my stories 'she cant stop shakin and i cant stop touchin her' and/or 'Truly madly deeply'.they're both romance and mean a hell of alot to me!hope to hear from u soon! mwah! xx

yeah, is this ur across the barricades poem?

omg, im seriosly angered and annoyed by that idiot. in fact, if i swore it would be more than that, at least 10 tiems worse. repost the whole story. seriously. oh and to the idiot: u r such a vile pice of scum that deserves to rot away in the fiery hells of whatever this planet has that is as bad as it can EVER get.

hey, give me a name and update...TO THE WORLD:LONIES B'dAY is TODAY!

smelly lonie,growing oldie,happy birthdee,lotsa huggee

hey, give me a name and update...TO THE WORLD:LONIES B'dAY is TODAY!

smelly lonie,growing oldie,happy birthdee,lotsa huggee

hi again... im gonna review this evritime i come online so that you can reach 100 at least, that would be great!

hello, this is moi's new name coz da other may be causing truble on fp (repeats) anyway, heres ur no 50!
Yay!
Poem:
Lonie's poem's very good,
Write another you really should.
As your talent needs to grow,
And your practice will let it show.
.
Talent only comes to a few,
But many more than you ever knew.
however though, yours is so great,
And its all yours on a silver plate.
.
I must go, but before i do,
Congratulations on 50 too.
That word means more than youll ever know,
Please, try hard, your talent will show.
.
.
Well, special mention of Jeebus, obviously, as she aint here, so yeah... 50! thats GREAT!
well, yeah, dedicated to u, duh, but thanks to jeebus!

1 more, ne1 takes it u delete

i haf 2 do long way, maybe 50 by 2 days from now.

ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)

ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)

ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)

ahh! someone reviewed! that calls for more from moi!
~haidee (not my real name)