Interesting. I hope you update soon.

Yeah, I can see that, the pace is just fine so don't worry about it. I hope Rich get's his woman straight, messing stuff and everything, spoiled littel... I look forward to the next chapter, mabey some of the old help will come back, I hope.

*Edification-Boy.

Good one! Yes, keep it fast paced. I never liked Susanna... hmm... hope you update soon! :)

I don't think it's too fast... On the contrary, I think it's a bit slow, but it's very good! I knew that woman would be trouble! UPDATE SOON!-THE RANDOM CRITIC-

I'm sorry, but I don't particularly like this one, oh but it's cool, I'm not flaming or anything, I guess construcive critisising. It seemed a bit rushed, and I was completly taken aback when all of a sudden I was reading about wedding plans; I didn't even know he had proposed yet! I know, I'm still comming off of this late, but I think you should go back and do some serious editing of this chapter Josie. This seemed, to me, like it would have been the best chapter of the story like you said, you might want to do some work on it. Other than that, I look forward to the next chapter, the story is still really cool.

*Pega-Gryph.

Good question, I certainly hope Susanna "is" the right woman for Richard. I await the next chapter.

*pega-gryph.

Yep good and long again, I really like Charlotte, she's just cool like that! Not much else, good job, 4 stars I give it, but you might want to go back and proof-read some of the chapter's not that they're up, speeling is all I can think of right now. God bless, and till the next chapter.

*pega-gryph.

Good, and long, a wonderful combination. I liked it, Charlotte is really cool and it's great that she's helping Mary and all that; she's so... incharge! I'm off to the next chapter Josie, till I Review

*pega-gryph.

Yep, it's different I'll admit that, it reminds me of "Around the World in 80 Days". Boyd's funny though, I'll be honest, this is far-fetched though, but I wonder if you'll fall in love. Well on to the next chap.

*pega-gryph.

aww you cant stop there you gotta keep writing!

Uh oh... Susanna's evil isn't she?UPDATE SOON!-THE RANDOM CRITIC-

They're... they're married? Just like that! Well, next chapter, please!! :)

Well, of course, trouble had to be on the horizon since everything was going so well. I have a very bad feeling about the new bride. So far your story is very rich and detail, and certainly as good as any novel, although it is a bit slow at times. When is her dowry going to come into play? I guess I'll just have to wait to find out.

Hmm, sounds good, now there's gonna be bad stuff happening right? HOPEFULLY, this story needs a plot twist. lol, love it. Keep it up!

I like this story a lot so far! Keep up the fab work.