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| Sword Lady 2005-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this one. I have been in this position and you really got all the right thoughts across. You're really good at this. My compliments. |
| TigerHawk102 2004-09-11 ch 1,  | abusethis is well done, and sad too. it's really ironic. i did not change,/you merely did not know me before. that's a very strong ending, and it makes you pause and think about what you just read. a little twist. good job! *hugs* ^_^ ~tigerhawk |
| simpleplan13 2004-08-21 ch 1, | abuseYou merely do not know me before... I htink did would be better I like it... I can think of a couple situations like that.. nicely done |