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| flannel boxers 2006-09-06 ch 1,   | i love this! |
| BOB 2005-03-18 ch 1, | This story is **!! |
| ddz008 2004-12-19 ch 3, | Great story!It's really interesting and I would love to read the next chapters!Conner is an interesting character... he fears what he is doing with Bastian, right?Please! Keep writing!I really hope to see the next chapter pretty soon!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
| Green Forest 2004-12-17 ch 3, | Update! please? this story is awesome |
| Decaying Rose 2004-11-26 ch 3, | Omg, I live in fife too. That is pretty scary. Anyway, I didn't really get the make-up scene bit, it kinda confused me. Apart from that, i like the chapter, can't wait for the next one. |
| princess max 2004-11-15 ch 3, | Oh, how awkward. I feel all embarrassed for Bastian, poor dear. |
| SweetAcid 2004-11-15 ch 3, | ::bows down and praises:: You are the yaoi queen! Your story is awesome. For the makeup scence with Conner, at first I thought that he was makeuping (made a new word) just to add an extra "umph" to his appearence, but then I started thinking he wanted to look good for Lacy. ::shrugs:: Who knows. Anywho, can't wait for you to update. |
| long forgotten 2004-11-12 ch 3, | we! hooray! anyways what will happened next? update soon! ^_^ |
| Staris 2004-11-11 ch 3, | ah loved the idea lol added to the dramatic irony ^.~ VERY nice touch on your part!! ah wondferful chapter! bravo bravo!! please update soon,and i can't wait for their next date bwahahah |
| seductivedevil 2004-11-10 ch 3, | It was cute! I'm a little confused about what happened between Lacy and Conner though! Update again soon! seductivedevil |
| subtleline 2004-11-08 ch 2, | Aww, poor Ama. Okay, to tell the truth she seems like a bit of a ** 2 me but I'm kinda biased since I like Dan, even if he is a potential jerk. As for Bastian, he amuses me to no end. Paranoia is fun, no. And he's so cute. And conner is just plain *rawr*. I mean, ...well, I really don't kno wut I mean but still, I luv him. Now he has 2 realize his 'soft-spot' for Bastian. It was actually evident since the beginning, but denial is so fun to play with. *grins* I also Like the party idea, now the question is will it help Bastian or harm him? hm...guess I'll have to wait then so don't take too long, i.e. UPDATE SOON PLEASE! *grins* |
| inarifox 2004-11-07 ch 2, | very interasting can't wait for more. fox |
| Alexander C. Destin 2004-11-03 ch 1, | I love this story...simply adore it. I read the review about Paradise Kiss...I too am a fan of that manga. I really hope you write a chapter 3...because you've definately caught my attention...now I'm addicted and want more |
| Um... 2004-11-02 ch 2, | Cute! Will be there more? Please? |
| Painted Desert 2004-11-02 ch 2, | i like this, please update it soon. I can't wait to read more. |