Interesting i now just how it feels to want someone that bad. This is good work

As always you have impressed me with your amazing poetry. You write with such a vivid flare and passion that this could be considered as a timeless masterpiece. Writing like this is destinied to become a classic. Well done and absolutely amazing! ~DS~

Again, wow. Like someone said before, intense and beautiful.

hem... i think i know what thins is going on about... but i like it! It's really good. i've not actually seen any like this before... some people that try to do something like this just sound REALLY pervy... but this was wonderful and you really pulled it off!

kudos. :]

Very intensely written. Nice work, displays exactly what feelings you were trying to convey.
-Cindy Moon *)

This is like poetic softcore **...heh heh...overall, I liked it, and if you actually feel these emotions, I am jealous. :)

Wow...I'm left speechless here. Your writing style is just wonderful... filled with feeling and emotion. Well done.

god, im like addicted to ur writing..its really good. i really like this poem. please dont stop writing! i want to read more of it!!
love always,
maren

The flow was incredible, it kinda sang in my head like a song. Great work!

WOW! And compared to me you think your shite? What are you on child?!?!?!It really lives up to the title "Passinoate", Great work!
Love and bubbles
*@*Laura*@*

GREAT poem...I'm not sure what else to say it's so great!

Beautiful detail and imagry. You have a true gift. Keep it up.
Much love,
Juliet.