|Reviews for Ashes|
| Dragon-Rider II 2/6/11 . chapter 1
Wow, I love this. It's really short, but powerful and descriptive. It's an unusual form of a haiku too, and I love that as well.
| Vanilla Tea 4/20/08 . chapter 1
Its short and simple, but very powerful, I loved it. You can really imagine this, too. Fantastic job!
SB, courtesy of the review marathon
| One-Hand Clap 4/19/08 . chapter 1
This haiku format is different, but I like it because it is effectively unique. The imagery of the 'ashes' in this really held me. Alone, it is a lingering concept. Well done! I loved it!
- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (check my profile for details!)
| Smoky Bear 11/15/05 . chapter 1
exquisite, glad i dropped by, wil DEFO be back 4 more.
| Lancealot 9/10/04 . chapter 1
Quick! but very descriptive and visual
| BloodKnives CrookedRainbows 8/27/04 . chapter 1
i like the finality in this. if it was longer it may bring about th meaning better, but this has an abrupt way that works too.
| ADreamer'sCurse 8/24/04 . chapter 1
Wow. Small and stunning! Please always continue your beautiful writings.
A Dreamer's Curse
| Tree of Victory 8/23/04 . chapter 1
I like the metaphor you added in. Rather intriguing.
Thanks for reviewing my poem, by the way!
| Fabian Cortez 8/23/04 . chapter 1
Very Well Done
| AntiPleasure 8/22/04 . chapter 1
I quite like this haiku format. Haikus are difficult to write if you don't know what the hell you're on about P The ashes imagery alone is a very interesting thought. Good work.
| DragonSlayerAV 8/22/04 . chapter 1
short but effective, nice work!
| Manuel Fajar 8/22/04 . chapter 1
Reverberates with overtones of life and death; stars and earth; and, so much more... -m-
Earth's skeleton & Life's form-
| Blinded by the Shadows 8/22/04 . chapter 1
That one person can be such a fount of emotion goes beond me. Keep the peoms coming and I'll keep the compliments flowing.
| SqurielLord 8/21/04 . chapter 1
good haiku. ashes to ashes-dust to dust isnt to orginal (read the bible) but I think this is good.
| G-unit 8/21/04 . chapter 1
It's different but it's really good. In other words I would read it again and again. Good title. Keep up the good work.
P.S. read chibichocobo's works. she's on my favorite lists.