Wow, I love this. It's really short, but powerful and descriptive. It's an unusual form of a haiku too, and I love that as well.

Its short and simple, but very powerful, I loved it. You can really imagine this, too. Fantastic job!

SB, courtesy of the review marathon

This haiku format is different, but I like it because it is effectively unique. The imagery of the 'ashes' in this really held me. Alone, it is a lingering concept. Well done! I loved it!

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (check my profile for details!)

exquisite, glad i dropped by, wil DEFO be back 4 more.

Quick! but very descriptive and visual

i like the finality in this. if it was longer it may bring about th meaning better, but this has an abrupt way that works too.

Wow. Small and stunning! Please always continue your beautiful writings.
A Dreamer's Curse

Interesting...
I like the metaphor you added in. Rather intriguing.
Thanks for reviewing my poem, by the way!

Perfect!
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C

I quite like this haiku format. Haikus are difficult to write if you don't know what the hell you're on about P The ashes imagery alone is a very interesting thought. Good work.
Jenna xoxo

short but effective, nice work!

Reverberates with overtones of life and death; stars and earth; and, so much more... -m-
Stellar dust,-carbon,
Earth's skeleton & Life's form-
Furnace residue.
-m- 22Aug04

That one person can be such a fount of emotion goes beond me. Keep the peoms coming and I'll keep the compliments flowing.

good haiku. ashes to ashes-dust to dust isnt to orginal (read the bible) but I think this is good.

It's different but it's really good. In other words I would read it again and again. Good title. Keep up the good work.
G-Unit
Ashley
P.S. read chibichocobo's works. she's on my favorite lists.