Awesome descriptions, you point out so many things that we never think about. You have a creepy, but yet satisfying style of writing. Can I add you as a fav?

Good job skipbo.I think you should think of more short storys. I don't ever remember to ask yoy this face to face to face so I'll ask you now. Whats your favret type of story? Mine is fantisy. I thought it would be fun to become somones fan. I chose you. Do exuse my terible writing I do hoible on spelling tests. I'll review in the futcher. Did I spell that right? Guess not. Now I've got a sore head from all this typing. Talk to or right to you soon. Head so sore must stop. I'll give you a hint each time. See ya. Well not see but you get it.

I totally relate. You've captured everyone's fears and made me swallow them whole. I loved it.

Really good. I like it.

P.S. I miss you bunches. :(

You're getting more and more disturbed aren't you? *Shakes head* Sadly, I'm going with ya.
Good story, a little short, though I still prefer Lost Faith. *Grins* I LOVE that story, maybe I should get mom to read it. *snickers* Yak at ya later
J

wow! that was awesome! is the girl and the woman the same person? or are they just being compared. either way this is one of the best things i've read here! great job! keep up the good work!
PS: this is so going on my favorites list! ^^v

This is excellent! I love your style of writing. This story is awesome. I loved it. The switching from the girl in her bed, scared of imaginary monsters, to the grown woman, afraid of real monsters, is very cool. Very good job. You're an awesome writer and this was a very original/neat/thoughtful/cool idea.

whoa, this was really cool. i dont know if ur planning to continue on it or not but it was good. very interesting idea. i liked it a lot. way to be
~Mack