Yeah! Damn the Man!! Very awesome... although I'm not sure peeing is releasing unsatisfied wanting... but then again... I'm stupid. Anyways, did I ever mention I like your psuedonym? Junior Mints are my favorite.
Wow, anyways... I liked the poem a lot. Don't let the Man get you down, Meggie.

This was interesting...
Very...um, slightly weird in paragraph 8, but, hey, you're the writer.
I haven't ever read a style like this before...
~Writer of Darkness~
r/r some of my stuff if u can...