I can relate to this one. Good job. :-D

i know exactly how you feel. There are days when I wish I could just vanish for a while. You express the feeling of longing to be free for a moment so well. Thanks for the reviews, I really appreciate your comments.

i think we all wish this at one time or another. ive been feeling like that all week. great job

i need one of those. when you find it can you tell me? i like the idea to "evaporate into thin air", to just let go. cool poem.
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hey, i heard u were looking for an essay on whores and sluts, i found one that pretty much relates to wat u're looking for, except for the siberia part, anyways its called 'Taught to Tease: The Double Standard for Women' by Mrs. Tasuki
on and by the way, great poem! ;)

hmm...i want a break from life too sometimes. but really, one can't temporarily die, can they?

I absolutely adore this poem! I ask myself that more than once a week. _ Awesome poem!

i like it, be more descriptive and show more emotion so that i can actually feel your pain, you know?

aw so sad! a wonderful poem though, good job.