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alias451 2006-06-14 ch 3, anon.	abuseThe story has great potential; it'll be interesting as to how Silk and Grey meet after many years and how Silk will attempt to save Chase. The grammar and punctuation are good and so the only thing left to say is... can't wait for the next update... hopefully it'll be soon?
RiverDoe 2005-09-24 ch 3, anon.	abusec'mon, please keep going. is chase going to die? live? please don't leave us hanging for long. fp.com won't let me review while logged in cos i've already submitted a review for this chapter (stupid site)
Lyra Waterflame 2005-09-12 ch 3,	abuseMore? Please? Soon?
clair_a_net 2005-09-04 ch 3, anon.	abusei think you might have deleted chapter two cause it goes one and three. just to let you know. So what attacked chase? is she going to save him? Why is everyone so heitant to tell her anthing? hope to read more soon.
Christine Bahrens 2005-07-10 ch 3,	abuseI really hope you update the actual story soon. It's extremely enjoyable. Not too certain i'd be interested in a prequel when this isn't even done. Stick to this for now and then you can think ahead :)
RiverDoe 2005-07-05 ch 3,	abuseideas for the title... Forgotten Past, Forbidden Past, Memories... really need to know a bit more of the story first. and yeah, it would be interesting to hear of silk's time at the castle with the prince.
clair-a-net 2005-06-30 ch 3,	abuseya i would love to read a prequal to your story. as for renaming. hm... well forgotten, the past revieled, lost and found ( kinda funny ), once a pirate always a pirate( dont know if that would fit or not but just a thought) kinda hard to come up with a name with out reading more of the story or knowing the plot. cast a shore, thank for reviewing my story. glad ya liked it ya i know i need to update it but i had school and then summer school which is crazy. hopefully i get some free time to work on my stories cause i would hate to post stuff not up to par. well hope to be reading more from ya soon.
clair-a-net 2005-06-29 ch 2,	abusethis is good you ned to write more so i can find out what is happening
Alice 2005-06-29 ch 2, anon.	abuseWonderful story! Good start just carry on lol
crazy-anime-girl 2005-06-28 ch 2, anon.	abusewow your story is so col hope you continue!!
Christine Bahrens 2005-06-28 ch 2,	abuseI love this story. I would very much enjoy it if you would update sometime soon. Please?
The baava Project 2005-06-28 ch 2,	abuseHey, whoa, you ENDED it there? ^_^;; That was a good read. Silk is a funny girl - her little adventure over buying ale had me laughing (thwarted, drats!). And then there's the mention of this perfect prince . . . and a dagger in Chase's back?! Yep, if you ever update this, please let me know! It's entertaining, and I've liked what I've read so far. ~ LoK
The baava Project 2005-01-17 ch 1,	abuseACK! You are the second writer tonight that has thrown me for a complete loop. scratches back of head I had printed out your story "My Immortal: The Beginning" way back on Sep 29th, but only just now had the time to come leave a review. Lo and behold, the story is gone! LOL! That's what I get, I guess, for taking forever to return review favors. So, whaddaya know, I'll review THIS story! Whee! [Grey often teased her about this but she had just waved them off, excusing him because she knew that secretly he wanted to wear her pretty dresses and have an angelic voice like hers.] ~ I can't stop laughing! I love this little girl! She's a brat! Normally, I like to be as helpful as possible in my reviews, leaving both constructive criticism and encouragement, but I like to have printouts for that. So, lucky you, you only get the good stuff from me tonight! ^_~ Very interesting! I enjoyed Risa's character right from the start - you've done an excellent job with her. You've also left your readers with a good hook at the end, so I shall be back for more! Keep it up! ~ LoK P.S. Thank you very much for reviewing my story!
RiverDoe 2005-01-01 ch 2,	abuseThis is a good story you have here. I hope you're going to continue it soon. (Note, I didn't read the older version, so I'm hoping you are going to continue this)
XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2004-09-19 ch 2, anon.	abuseYAY! An update! I'm sorry it too me so long to get here. big breath but never fear! I would have gotten here sooner of later. Thank you for a WONDERFUl new chapter. I LVOED it! An exccellent story you have going here. please keep up the great work! ~Nikki~

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