Heh, I lawled at this. I'm surprised that I haven't ever seen your stuff before, but I must say that I'm glad I found you. I'm officially putting you on my author alerts! Le gasp!

Would it be horribly sketchy if I said I totally relate to this piece?

-Nub

Great. Simply great.

Heh, the ending was funny. This is a great piece of writing.

Love,

LlaMa

*giggles* That was a funny end. I liked it a lot. :D

@_@ WAI! I lubb ur story... i lubb da ending... very well done.

"Grey was a subduing color. They controlled you by surrounding you in gray."you might want to use the same form of gray. interesting twist at the end. but there were some confusing moments.you might want to make the fact that they went under the table a little clearer. i had to read that part again because i thought they were still just sitting at the table

good use of the colors and the darkness too, it's good to put that kind of stuff into writing

dammit all! It was just a dream! >_

Aww...It was a dream. How disappointing. I think it is great how you did all of the story using the metaphors and connecting everything with the colors in the study hall. You aslo did a very nice job of making the whole thing seem quite romantic and innocent. From reading your bio I think I would really enjoy talking to you. I.M. me sometimes. DramaNazi16.

wow! that was so good! going on my favorites for sure! that was so cool the way you melted that all together in a dream like that! awesomeness!

hehehe, that was great.
~Princess Fluffy~

Wo. That rocked XD ^_^ Great job. *hits brother*

you write good, i though tit was real and all but the ending was twisted ( i gues) lol anyway good job ** hands writer a cookie**

That was awesome. Abstract and wonderful, just like the dream it turned out to be. Nice!

aw i liked this story lol it's cute!! ^.^ i really hope you plan on writing more!! cuz it was good lol poor Seth, he'll find a guy!! i know he will ^.^ anyways good job on this! pleas continue?? maybe??