That was GREAT!

Wow. That's all that came to mind when I read this. Simply "wow." Awesome work here. This is a great poem.
~Daphne~

Completely chilling. It was almost as though I were there watching this happen as I read your poem. Write on!

Hmm "Crimson night" Well, first of all, nice title! I liked this alot, found it both beautiful and haunting. Great use of language.
I'm kinda a newbie here myself, so I'm gonna have a look at more of your work. But might take me a while, you seem to have one hell of a lengthy list. Overall, fascinating poem.
Good job!

I really like the language you've used in this poem, I can almost see the scene happening, very powerful writing, well done.
~lozfairy x~

hey I liked your poem, it was quite gory(sp?) anyway, You need a few commas in places. Also, you should maybe make the poem a bit longer and give it a bit more explanataion, but I like it.
P.S. Will you have a look at mine?