|Reviews for Narrative|
| TJ Henri 8/23/04 . chapter 1
I have nothing to say, except: do you have a band? That was unbelievably super. Yes, super. I don't even care that you're not using fancy metaphors that I consider poetically standard - the emotion just cuts through it. I'm tired. Maybe more tomorrow.
| graffiti-skies 8/22/04 . chapter 1
this was pretty good. i liked the 2nd stanza better though