|Reviews for War|
| Giraffe 63 8/22/04 . chapter 1
A little forced rhyming, but the concept and imagery are quite good. I thought the line, "Long is the fiend's nose" was clever. Nice work.
| simpleplan13 8/22/04 . chapter 1
I like it.. nice rhyming.. powerful poem.. great job
| negligible fictional force 8/22/04 . chapter 1
so true, so devastating.
this is, tragically beautiful.
keep it up.