Reviews for My Life Not Yours

Jaz108 2004-10-12 ch 1,	UPDATE!! Please!! I wanna know what happens!
xTamx 2004-08-22 ch 1,	Thats a great start! I really enjoyed that and it was a really nice length! I LOVE horses. I had an albanian horse myself a couple of months ago but we sold him which sucked. Anyways I really liked this! Update asap!
Lauren Raven 2004-08-22 ch 1,	This is pretty good so far; the horse is a nice touch =) A couple of suggestions, though. Number One: Make Brenda's desire to please her parents a little less obvious, or make her emotions about the subject a little deeper and a little less cliched. Make her an original character, rather than the somewhat-ignored younger daughter who always wants to be good enough for her rich parents but never will be. Alright one tip for you. But great job, and write more soon!