|Reviews for You Must Go On|
| sheasrebellion 8/22/04 . chapter 1
really, really sad.
I think I like the third stanza the best (think cause they're all good, especially 2 and 3). And the last two lines are really striking as well.
| The Moribund Marionette 8/22/04 . chapter 1
Wow! This had great rhythm. When read fast, this has a great beat. Very cool...
Keep up the creative work,
Writer of Darkness