Very, very nice. Brilliant, even. I would've thought it even more so if the title of your poem wasn't the exact same as The Verve Pipe's album. I am not accusing you of anything, but you may want to consider renaming... other's could get the wrong idea. Otherwise, really well written and appreciated. Keep it up!

This is cool, the way you wrote it. I couldn't understand it that well, but I got the idea. Very nice poem, keep writing.