Ooh, nice! Seems a bit LOTR inspired... nothing wrong with that. Nice imagery, great writing style.
Good job, and keep writing!
~Kai

wow. i love this. really.. i'm in awe
i want to be able to write like this

I LIKE it! YAY! the descriptions reminded me of book characthers. . .and the last one sounded so increadilby farmillier, I wonder, how could that be?
~Arlyn

Oh wow, that was great!
The repetition of "Into the enemies heart" was a wonderful ending to each of the stanzas of each person. I love how its boy/girl, very nicely done.
And the last two lines are just so amazing!
This is a really well written piece, great job!

Alo, this is a GREAT poem..me likey! :D