Okay, I write poetry and I have to say that I like it. I lover it!

This reminds me of Dirty Dancing.

I wrote something similar once, but nowhere quite as good.

Great job. :]

I think that it's supopsed to be "breaths catching", instead of "breathes catching". Still, a very good poem.

Brilliant! Leads right up to a climax, then just leaves you hanging. The style you wrote your poem in perfectly matches the mood and point of the story/poem. Nice tie in to your story, with the red dancing skirt and all. Nicely done!

great, but enough with spanish!

Wow, this was very short and intense. Awesome.

wow I loved, LOVED your poem! It one of those poems where you can see exactly what is happening through you words. Very expressive, and keep writing! :)

Ha- you know what this poem reminds me of? The Real World Extreme episode right after newbie, Gillian, arrves and they have to tango on a platform that's held way high up in the air by a crane!

This is wonderfully erotic and paints a very vivid picture wonderfully, without ever going over to blatancy.
I loved the style of this.
Very Well Done
KEEP WRITING!
F.C

Hey, that was cool! It totally reminded me of Dirty Dancing!

AH i can't believe you advertised my story. i actually squeled and clapped my hands. hah, i'm such a loser. anyways- i love this poem. it's like my sexual frustration poems- as my friend so lovely dubs them. but 10x greater. i love love love it. (oh, and i'm working on the 6th chapter right now)

I'd like to think that you wrote that poem just for me because you love me! ) Anyway, I love the poem. It's hot and I love it simply because you wrote it and it's about latin dancing and you know me and latin dancing. Your poem conjured up R rated images of MY Diego(no matter what Fareh says). I know you love him too and if it ever came down to which he wanted more, me or you, it would be you. lol but really, i like the poem for various reasons, but I like it nonetheless.