|Reviews for Then The Music Stops|
| OMG Dude 4/2/09 . chapter 1
Okay, I write poetry and I have to say that I like it. I lover it!
| eLm0 9/19/07 . chapter 1
This reminds me of Dirty Dancing.
I wrote something similar once, but nowhere quite as good.
Great job. :]
| luv me like no other 4/26/07 . chapter 1
I think that it's supopsed to be "breaths catching", instead of "breathes catching". Still, a very good poem.
| k 4/2/05 . chapter 1
Brilliant! Leads right up to a climax, then just leaves you hanging. The style you wrote your poem in perfectly matches the mood and point of the story/poem. Nice tie in to your story, with the red dancing skirt and all. Nicely done!
| mo 3/17/05 . chapter 1
great, but enough with spanish!
| ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 3/1/05 . chapter 1
Wow, this was very short and intense. Awesome.
| Beautiful Catastrophe 8/27/04 . chapter 1
wow I loved, LOVED your poem! It one of those poems where you can see exactly what is happening through you words. Very expressive, and keep writing! :)
| Aurelione 8/24/04 . chapter 1
Ha- you know what this poem reminds me of? The Real World Extreme episode right after newbie, Gillian, arrves and they have to tango on a platform that's held way high up in the air by a crane!
| Fabian Cortez 8/22/04 . chapter 1
This is wonderfully erotic and paints a very vivid picture wonderfully, without ever going over to blatancy.
I loved the style of this.
Very Well Done
| Ria Mala 8/22/04 . chapter 1
Hey, that was cool! It totally reminded me of Dirty Dancing!
| Mass Descent 8/22/04 . chapter 1
AH i can't believe you advertised my story. i actually squeled and clapped my hands. hah, i'm such a loser. anyways- i love this poem. it's like my sexual frustration poems- as my friend so lovely dubs them. but 10x greater. i love love love it. (oh, and i'm working on the 6th chapter right now)
| VenatrixNoctis 8/22/04 . chapter 1
I'd like to think that you wrote that poem just for me because you love me! ) Anyway, I love the poem. It's hot and I love it simply because you wrote it and it's about latin dancing and you know me and latin dancing. Your poem conjured up R rated images of MY Diego(no matter what Fareh says). I know you love him too and if it ever came down to which he wanted more, me or you, it would be you. lol but really, i like the poem for various reasons, but I like it nonetheless.