Another good one...I really admire your style, you know. The dog-creature sort of sounded like it belongs in one of the 'Silent Hill' games, doesn't it? I liked how...grounded it seemed. It was realistic, like it could actually happen, and that's one of the reasons it's so chilling. It was romantic too, in a way, when he chose to take Danielle with him. I wonder how she feels about that?

This was really plain terrifying! You deserve so many more reviews for this; I was riveted to the screen reading it. Congrats!

Very nice. I really enjoyed that and it gave me chills.

Nicely done. I really enjoyed the reference to the clock ticking (seemed to add a nice little flair there). Anyway, I also liked the part about Danielle seeing Ben's eyes just before she died. Good job, do write more stories like this!

this was one hundred and thirty percent NOT what i expected, but i loved it.