Neat - it's like one of those "story poems" I enjoy those a lot. And the last line is just awesome.
later
~Reda~

Interesting, what was your inspiration?

Hey, glad you're back - haven't heard from ya in a while - and thanks for the review!
Like the first reviewer said, the last line has a nice kick to it, but that third stanza gave me the shivers too! And I like the word 'wraithling', very creative. Has an eerie and defiant tone to it - very cool.
-LuthienLuin

Great poem. I especially love that last line. =)